Sad romance

by DirtRoadGirl   Sep 5, 2011


Scattered memories,
broken words,
tearful eyes,
and broken bones.

Bruise after bruise,
slap after slap.
Curse after curse,
you can't fight back.

Moment after moment,
lost in a trance.
See the blood,
of a sad romance.

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Yes this is simple but it feels like a perfect piece. With only a few very simple words you have managed to create a wonderful piece. There is a very strong flow, that is supported by the amazing word choice and the emotion that has been inserted. I think you have done a wonderful job. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I love this girl <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Simple, but really sad :(

    I liked the wording in it ..

    Keep up the good work :)

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