What I see

by Joshua   Sep 8, 2011


What I see

What I see when I look in your eyes
Is more precious than money can buy
Nothing else in the world can compare
The moments we've shared
I feeling deep down is unexplainable
At times I get unstable
You're more than these words could ever explain
That's why it so hard to keep all this contained
The sound of your voice, and the touch of your skin
There's so much to say...where do I begin
I'll start at the top, with your beautiful hair
How it shapes your face I can't help not to stare
And your gorgeous face...
Takes me to another place
A place of amazing grace
Your luscious lips...
Oh the heavenly bliss
How they taste when we kiss...there's nothing better than this...
Down to your breast...my heart is pounding out of my chest!!!
Moving further down below...
Oh how I dream of where I might go...
Past all this down to your legs
Ok...stop making me beg...
Almost done...now to your cute little toes...
How well you're put together only you know...
So I swear all this is true
Not for you to misconstrue
But to let you know how I feel about you

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  • 10 years ago

    by Dragon Boy

    Hello,

    you got a good one there!
    this line got me thinking of what you were trying to say:

    "I feeling deep down is unexplainable"

    I feeling deep? or I feel deep? or A feeling deep?

    just thought i should let you know!
    the flow was very good, and i was enjoying it, until i got towards the ending of the poem!

    it was a little bumpy!
    but i could see you tried to get it back on track!

    keep it up!
    cheers
    Robie Lincer