by Joshua Sep 8, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
love is
What I do and how I feel |
by Jenni
I think that this poem flows quite well and the rhymes make it flow even better. I like the context and I think you worded it quite nice. The simplicity of your words underline the message quite well, that the speaker simply loves the person this is directed to. It's definitely a heartfelt poem, well done. |