Vivid Dream

by Innocent Fairy   Sep 9, 2011


I had this vivid dream
so vivid it was real.
I came to you
we were friends
you always knew what to say
and the pain of my ex
so strong i wanted to cry
he was on my mind.

You played the piano so well
it was calming and peaceful
beautiful and mesmerizing.
I didn't tell you my feelings
but somehow you knew.
You tried to pull my mind to better things
you made me smile
you made me laugh
we were best friends
but i think i felt a little crush.

You walked towards me
and you looked like a god
you're so sexy
beautiful
mesmerizing
you've bewitched me
and i felt myself very drawn to you.

You sat next to me
to comfort me
and i felt safe and secure,
warm in you're arms embrace.
The moment so passionate
and you kissed me on the forehead several times
inching closer and closer each time to my lips
In my moment of weakness
and innocence
you drew me in
my craving for you grew so much.
We kissed
slow at fist
then everything moved so fast
you had me in you're grasp.

Sexual arrousement
you didn't even ask
but i loved it
i craved more
so much passion
so much pleasure,
the intensity was wonderful
but too much.
We were connected in a way
like two tear drops merged into one.
The butterflies in my stomach
keep bouncing around
it only made me want you more.

We stopped
and i had to go,
I tried to run away
but you grabbed me
and pulled me back.
My feelings confused
but passion so powerful
I started to cry
You wiped my tears away
kissed me
and said
don't leave
please stay with me...
I love you!
You got on one knee
and proposed
you even had the ring
I love you
Please stay with me
you said.
My heart was pumping
about to explode
I awoke
but not really.
my heart still beating fast,
I had a dream
so vivid it was real.

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  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    The vivid dream just sounded so realistic to the reader. Without the first 2 and the last 2 lines, it would have been difficult to make out that this was really a dream narration. I am glad you have the talent to put dreams in poetry so well. Simply beautiful.

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I really liked it. The wording was great and so was the flow. Thought the 1st stanza didn't seem to go with the others some how. Other then that it was great. it was also a good length.

    gave it a 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Love love this<3.
    You could see everything playing out like it was me having the dream. The passion you felt poured through, the tears pouring out of your eyes you could see.
    Amazing job.
    (:
    5/5