Get out of my poetry

by nouriguess   Sep 17, 2011


The more I want you to forsake
this paper,
the deeper it ogles you.

My metaphors.

They chose to cheat me
and make love to you.

I want to bluster my poetry
towards your homeland, exhaling
away each drop of ink that's
been aged within me
for you.

By : Noura Hatem.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Words are so good.. very strong writing.. i love it... your poems always are good

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    OMG Noura. You're so powerful with words, and I honestly adored each and every line of this masterpiece you've penned, as always.
    It's so enticing to read a piece of yours. I really get inspired everytime, and I just can't get enough. Addicting. I know XD

    You have a way with words, probably you always read the same comment from me, but hey, I only speak what's on my mind. You know you're my mere poetess here, capable of writing pieces no one have ever imagined. You have a poetic power, I know. Baby keep writing, for you make me smile everytime, especially when you write Miscellaneous poems. They are your type! And you do great stuff within this category. Keep writing my buddy.

    I love you and your poetry.
    No. I'm not writing this much to get my comment praised (I've finally got the white C :p) but to let you know that you are worth every comment, whether it offers an insight or not.

    THIS IS AWESOME.
    Cinq, ma cherie :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    The title caught my eye!!
    I knew this would be original but I was slightly disappointed with the complicated words, I felt these were inserted merely for intellect.
    But the content and metaphors worked very well and was well ended

    Love
    Tara

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, Noura, this is amazing, as usual from you. Great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    I want to bluster my poetry
    towards your homeland, drinking
    each drop of my ink that's
    been aged within my pockets

    wow this is so powerful Noura I love it :)