Beneath a tree

by Innocent Fairy   Oct 5, 2011


She ponders into the open
beneath a tree as the rain falls
thinking where could her ride be

Unprepared for what lies ahead
a cold breeze cooling thee air she breaths
hands turning numb she begins to freeze
thinking where could her ride be

As she waits beneath a tree
and she can see the rain drops
around her as time begins to freeze
and colored trees
while bird fly free
and it's very green

Rain falls slower now
less in depth but
still sharp cold breeze

The wind blows around her wildly
and thee air is wiped clean,
a little wet and she wants to cry

Searching through her thoughts
trying to stay happy
but it's not without difficult you see
for the pain she's seen
waiting beneath a tree
where could her ride be

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  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You have a great imagination that flows from your hand to your pen. The imagery was calming though the poem sad in content..

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I could visualize this in my head :)

    The imagery was perfect. You can see her underneath the tree, her pondering in her head where is my ride. Why aren't they here yet? Going numb, slowly freezing trying to remain happy but losing faith in it

    It flowed perfectly(:. It made you wanna keep read

    5/5(: