Musical Dream

by NightFlyer   Oct 7, 2011


I dreamt I came up to the shore
And stared out on the windy bay
Bright city lights aglow, I saw,
Miami Beach, a mile away.

I felt our band had reached our dream
As ocean clouds drifted along
No doubt, dear Mari, it would seem
The whole wide world now loved your song.

In rapture, I gazed at the sea
Our band had finally met with fame
Our music now had set us free
And everybody knew our name.

This feeling of success, so real,
Nothing with it could e'er compare
To know our music gained appeal
Across the country, everywhere.

They beckoned us, those lights of gold
To share our music with the night
And build a dream of things untold
As I awoke in sheer delight.

But fame flew by, and left us here
And with time, passed our merry band
Still my sweet dream remains so clear
When I hear songs of Mari Ann.

by Nightflyer (c) 2011
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* I used to be a guitarist for a band in Florida formed by my friend Mari Ann. She was the band leader and wrote most of our original songs. This poem is about a dream I had some years ago after driving from Miami.

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  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    You are so dreamy, Randy.So dreamy.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I really like this.
    It spoke of real things. It's annoying to see a broken band.

    And you expressed that in a flawless, rhythmic way with amazing rhyming scheme, flow, depth yet simple wording.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    This is really a nice poem. I like the flow and wording. Nice as always

    Connie

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    We all have dreams that we want to remember but you penned this with so much realism. Music and poetry do go hand in hand and it's easy to see you've got the talent.
    Good stuff bro

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    It is amazing how a dream can stand out from all the rest and we can remember them, seems like forever. Nice.