Love Me

by Sunshine   Oct 10, 2011


You woke me up from
deep slumber when
I was about to manage
sleeping forever,
doesn't matter if
it was fate or a late
coincidence that
tripped down my hood
by mistake, but I I know
I am enjoying daydreaming
about you all the time,
about me, about us.
You know even the gust
feels so intimate now
as I breathe, time now
runs like a course in a mad
river when before it flowed
like a dead beat that's stuck
among boundaries of a location.
How to explain for you
dear that time, now, with you
doesn't even take place..
Perhaps I could give you hints
but you don't need
to understand, well I never
understood-Just,
do fall in love with me.

by: Rania Moallem

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  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Beautifuly and emotionaly written..rania..i can only gv 5..

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    "you know even the gust
    feels so intimate now
    as I breathe"

    Ohhh Banana. This is beautiful. I love reading love poetry from you. It still has pieces of you every where I read, but it has a new spin, a new beauty, a new hope. This is gorgeous poetry. Your sad stuff always gives me more to say, but your love stuff... now thats what I can TRULY relate to. This is power.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Beautiful poem. Your wording was almost dreamy, masterpiece material :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    So beautiful. It doesn't matter how it happened, whether it was fate or a coincidence like you said, you just want them to fall in love with you & something tells me that he will or has already started to. I'm so happy for you! These happy poems are very enjoyable I must say. Well done!

  • 12 years ago

    by RSJ

    Dear god Nana, I'm in love with the innocence.
    What I really Admire about most of your Reads is that when you write a Sad poem, You can come up with the Saddest Ideas I have ever came across, Reading your poetry Does get my brain to think, and try to react with your situation, what gets to me though, and amazes me the most is that even your love poems have that feeling of best described as epic, I'm in love with the ideas you've presented here, as much as i'm in love with how happy this poem is. it's like the happiest poem of all happy poems.

    here you've written a love poem
    a beautiful love poem that is filled with innocence and Raw feelings and emotions that even for a person like me, who haven't felt these emotions for quite a while now, Can totally relate to it, it's like you've Ignited that feeling in me, and the poem doesn't even concern me, and for that i give you 5, along with a nomination, and a hope that this poem does win the weekly contest, becasue it deserves too.

    God bless you. and thanks for allowing me the joy of venturing into Realms full of love and peacefulness, your poetry is indeed beauty to my eye,
    Gifted indeed.

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