by the vengeful truth Oct 15, 2011
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Am i paranoid to think that he doesn't feel the way i do |
by Sylvia
You have the foundation for a good poem here. Perhaps make it into at least 2 verses and not use so many parenthesis. I think that at times we all become a little paranoid about relationships and life in general and ask ourselves many of the same questions you have in this poem. |