Standing By

by Innocent Fairy   Oct 18, 2011


Water fills her eyes
as the tears start to flow
this is killing her inside
knowing she can't have
and hates standing by
watching her love,
love another
but knows he may
love her as well
but it kills her
waiting and hoping
standing by and
she cries
hating this feeling
can't wait forever
starting to pull away
starting to turn around
starting to give in
thinking maybe
I'm not the one
maybe
it's not me
should i move on
should i carry on
let someone else have me
and maybe feel for them one day
but she wants him so bad
she hates this feeling
rotting in her core
killing her inside
thinking let go
but wanting him so much
it's hard
on her mind all the time
Water fills her eyes
as the tears start to flow
this is killing her inside
knowing she can't have
and hates standing by

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  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Shadows

    I have no words to praise your write. I could feel my heart cry when tears flooded in my eyes.

    Touched.

  • 12 years ago

    by Nomad Being

    Wow.. that is a real feeling one has when your lover ignores you !!! nice poem :)

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Hey! Fairy Queen did you know you crossed 200 mark with this one. You may be in the top 1% of the PnQ writers for crossing this mark. Congratulations on another ingenious, impasiioned, insightful, and intense luv doodle!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jess

    Woww; its insane how perfectly I Relate To This At This Point In My Life.. AndIts Inspiring.. Like, I Feal Like I Can Let Go But I Dont Want To. you Know? :) Its Just Hard. And Thats What You Said And It Basically Sums It Up, Hard! Lol
    Good Work!
    5/5
    Jessi

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A turbulent poem of emotion, lifted by winds of indecision, excellent poem.