Let me be...

by luminous wonder   Oct 28, 2011


Let me be...
The hand to hold,
when life has left you torn to the bone.

Let me be...
The whispers in the wind,
calling your name in times when you are in need.

Let me be...
The catcher of your dreams,
bringing your wishes to life and fighting away the many screams.

Let me be...
The smile on your face,
especially in times where sadness seems to misplace.

Let me be...
The first one you see,
to wipe away your tears on the endless sea.

Let me be...
The heart beats within,
pouring out my love for you on the strings of a violin.

Let me be...
Just let me be,
Your one true love for the rest of eternity,
For I will never abandon you...

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  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Lovely poem robin..
    Ful points..

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Amazing beautiful wonderful I loved it :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    You really poured out emotions here. Lucky be the guy for whom this was written. I hope he deserves his love.

    My only suggestion, the last stanza suggests a little possesiveness, perhaps to the reader. If I was to write this one, I would use something such as :

    Let me be...
    Just let me be,
    Your only love when no one else cares for you

    and ending with a punch line:

    I will never abandon you, my love

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    I like the flow and message of this poem.
    It was really sweet and displays an inner love and devotion for someone that you care about.
    I like the repetition of the words let me be it really is a great poetic device displaying emphasis on the significant messages of the poem. I think your ending was a nice way to end the piece. I nice and easy read :) thanks for sharing 5/5

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