This is very well written, and I love the reps of A lonely, poignant lover it was effective in driving the theme home

This is a really nice poem,... ummm wait,, that sounded kinda lame.. what i mean IS... =D

The use of morning, afternoon, evening and goodbye, is wonderfully placed, building a plot-line, essentially drawing the reader in. the repetition as mentioned above builds a sense of whole (its a complete piece not a shard of a poem like a lot I've seen on PnQ)

And yet more important than these meaningless literary tools, is the feelings you embodied into the work... you make it quite clear you were feeling these emotions as you wrote it,
And you have no problem relaying this to paper (or font) a poem of this caliber is pretty rare on this site, from the 20 to 30 I have actually read.

Brilliant..

D whole idea..i hv nvr read smthin like dis b4.
Ful points..

Beautiful poem with natural flow. Enjoyed it all the way. A 5 from me!

Amazingg! keep it up! :)

I loved it, it seems so elegant and nostalgic, i could hear music while i read it making it beautifully sincere and emotional.

I loved it, it seems so elegant and nostalgic, i could hear music while i read it making it beautifully sincere and emotional.

Wow!
i luv how u expressed this <3
5/5

5/5 speechless

Like the idea in this

Omg you are amazing... your poetry just captivates me i cant stop reading and i need to get back to work lol

Wow!

What can I say? I am so captivated by this poem.

The whole poem was so strong but I found most of the strength in the first and last stanza. You opened the poem amazingly and closed the poem just the same!

This is one of my fav's!

x 5/5

Thanks for the words

Amazing 5/5