Walking With An Ocean Of Thoughts?

by Innocent Fairy   Oct 31, 2011


You walk the shores
leaving footsteps in the sand
walking along
with no master plan

Thee ocean wipes clean
all the feelings between
and sets you free
within peace and serenity

As you walk along
and stroll across the sand
you listen to the waves
nature's music nature's band

You clear your mind,
let you're self go,
soar through the wind,
listening to you're heart,
deciding what's right
and let you're troubles fade

As you just stop to feel
Across the sky you glance
Wondering if your ready
To maybe take a chance
It has hurt before each time
You think about what is to gain
Fear slips into the walk
As you remember previous pain

The memories come like a flood
but you begin to wonder
can this time be different
can this time be real
should I take the leap of faith
take a risk, for either way
everything will change

For the heart is a vessel
that one has to be careful with
Though it will hold much
and is extremely strong
It is made special
It is made to be cherished
It wasn't made to be treated wrong

You wonder if to not say something
Is the same as not being true?
Not telling are you really being real?
But if they really care for you
And who you think they are
Yet you wonder once it is said
will they be distant like a star

~Poets notes
This is a collab done with a great, amazing guy,, Bobby and I hope to do many more,,thanxs and please comment and rate on his as well :)
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=481318

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  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I really really appricaite this comment and it means alot

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww I really liked this poem! I loved the title - it caught my eye... I liked the descriptions and your choice of words... the parts about walking on the sand and listening to the ocean's music was breathtaking.. I could imagine this scenario!

    Well done - a really nice collaboration! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You both did a great job, but then both are very talented. I hope to see more from the two of you . I enjoyed each line, it was smooth and clear.

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobby

    I enjoyed doing this it was fun, shooting from the hip shows something about you and your talent is even more revealing. Your parts are the best parts :0)