Love it :)

so true :)
i can see the angels crying & the flames from the demons.

great job<3
5/5

You did well with this form

I suck at formed poetry, so I should congratulate you for trying! This piece should be in the dark section, however.

Well-done.

I guess that the only thing I can say is or do is bow at you and say "well done", it is a difficult form and you did well,
I find these forms a little forced due to the rhyme scheme and syllable count, as was this one in places but you made up for that with the simple wording and imagery.
Hats off to you (Well I would If I was wearing one lol)

love
Tara

I think that this was quite interesting, not only because of its form, but also because you chose to wrote those two stanzas about angels and demonds, which are obviously contrary. I agree to the comments above that your choice of words was simply, but it actually fit in my opinion and I liked the rhymes too.

Hey you! Well done on the challenge :)

It's amazing how you managed to pull out this piece with such vivid imagery :)

I love this and I admire you for trying out new things, I thing you did really well <3

It's beautiful and aww i love angels!

Darn good job with the whole theme. It was vivid and well penned my friend. Keep it up