Diabolical Behavior

by Meme   Nov 1, 2011


Pouring salt on
an open wound,
digging deep
a buried pain.

Reminding of
a lingering ache,
scattering the pieces
of a broken heart.

Abducting the soul
from its beholder,
depriving the chance
of one last breath.

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© Copyright 2011 by: gIrL
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  • 14 years ago

    by RSJ

    It doesn't get darker than this now, does it?
    the opener reminded me of a song by BB called Breath, Although pour salt into the open wound
    helps it heal faster =-) burns more but sure heals faster <3
    nominated once i get my voices back
    no bet.

  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow I love this poem! It was dark, deep, yet so intriguing. I felt the pain, especially of the open wound... and it was an amazing piece. Well-written and powerful my friend!! =)

  • 14 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    Short and powerfull
    a very well put together piece

    i liked your choice of words for this
    i feel your pain

    5/5 from me

  • 14 years ago

    by Jeremy S Farley

    Really good work. You fit alot of painful emotion in a very small space. I dont think the title matches very well though.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Short but dynamic. A well penned write. Keep it up I really enjoy your work

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