The hurt and the lies

I hope you feel
worse than we feel
you'll pay the price
please let me be fine
let me leave this behind
because
now I'm dying inside
-He will girl... Sooner or later the players feel the pain.

Reading this whole thing, i could feel the pain you feel inside. That burning sensation that won't fade. The one you thought was gone, when it was only shoved aside.

I loved this. It was penned with heartbreaking emotion perfectly.

Great Job
5/5

The emotion comes across very well, and I could almost feel the blows (emotional) of what you were feeling.
Just one thing,

"were friends now
she feels sick too
were both crying
and she's deciding"

It should be We're as in We are friends now,
We are both crying.
Were would be like "were there any truths?"

Once again, nice write. :)
**Brii