Lost Inside

by Innocent Fairy   Nov 8, 2011


I'm sorry
I guess I should be honest
but I feel different,
it's kinda weird,
hard to explain
and I must tell you
I can't wait forever.

I've been thinking
and thinking,
can't get you off my mind
but I feel lost inside

I wanna figure this out
I wanna feel what I feel
and I've gone against rules
that I have set for me

I've been thinking
and thinking,
can't get you off my mind
but I feel lost inside

Here I am
living moment to moment
and I do enjoy
but I'm sorry to say
I feel plain,
lost inside
and the doubts settle in
as I try to push them away
but somehow greet
and enjoy

Perhaps it's an evil from inside
a darkness I hide
or my wall,
has been built,
warning
and becoming satisfied

It's bad I know
but I can't help but do so
for I feel lost inside
with you on my mind

I've been thinking
and thinking,
can't get you off my mind
but I feel lost inside

I wanna figure this out
I wanna feel what I feel
I wanna live this moment
and to forget the doubts
but I feel lost inside

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  • 14 years ago

    by Boy

    Such a sad poem. here i have few suggetions for you..

    make the stanza shapess. so it will better look like and would be more easy to read and understand the depth of emotions. first character of every line should be capital.

    and

    "I feel plain,
    lost inside"

    are you sure you had to write plain instead of pain. check it..

    toher than this poem have so many emotions deep true lost love.. i realy enjoyed reading your poem...

  • 14 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This is deeply moving! the whole tone to the poem is dark and harsh. You connect with the reader instantly. Such sorrow and pain you speak of yet you can see the character in the poem is a fighter wanting to figure things out and find herself.

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Decayed

    The best thing in here is the atmosphere you have created.. so gloomy and I can picture all the question marks looming above your head!

    Great job with that. You made your piece alive..

    :)

    Way to go Kristian.

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