Mistakes

A gloomy one and Oh-so-perfect...!!

When we met, I was sure you were different.
You were going to be the one who didn't break my heart.
Turns out, I was dead wrong.
And you broke it worse than I could have ever imagined.

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this verse is true enough as it happens in life that people seem to be so jovial and seem to fill our life with love but they have a veil on their face which seem to uncover as time passes...

This story starts out like a fairytale.
Late-night conversations and full-hearted smiles.
I never once thought about, "too good to be true."
It all seemed so perfect.
I guess my mistake was just falling for you.

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good start for stating the story...:)
It depicts how and individual shows or portrays themselves when they seem to encounter us as friends for initial times,just wnating to win our trusts...!

The fairytale slowly begins to decay.
As dreams are shattered and lives forever changed.
It was you who decided I wasn't worth the time.
And it was then that I realized you were nothing but lies.

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this verse was good too...!!
After winning our trust,they feel its time for making us the slave and under the friendship stuff,they ruin our lives...!!
good verse....!!

Memories of what used to be still linger about.
Deep inside my memory you're still severing my heart.
The anguish you've caused is a secret I lock away.
Breaking my heart was your mistake.

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good end...!!

I liked this verse...
Good work...:))

I can relate to this.
The pain of him breaking your heart when you thought it was perfect. Never once doubting it being a lie. Amazing :)

Emotion flows through this, his biggest mistake breaking your heart losing your forever

Perfect piece (:
5/5

Awww I love it