Puzzling Difference

by Innocent Fairy   Nov 21, 2011


Why is it that only
when I talk with you
everything feels right,
and my feelings exceed

But when your away
I just don't know what to think

Always on my mind
while I try to figure this out
it's a puzzle when your gone
but with you
everything's in place

I know and feel
that your a good guy
but the past has ruined
my very chance

I have to hope
this time will be different
this guy will be different
because every moment
with you is amazing

Your wonderful
so I have to believe
I feel your real
and the butterflies you bring
it's all amazing

I just wanna be with you
I like you

I always hope
you feel the same

I feel so much you see
so I know
and I have to believe
your different
and meant for me

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  • 8 years ago

    by Lioness

    What I love about this poem is the fact that the emotions can be felt and that they are real.

    There are always doubts within new relationships especially if you've had bad relationships in the past. You start to compare each person you've ever dated to your current lover.

    Always on my mind
    while I try to figure this out
    it's a puzzle when your gone
    but with you
    everything's in place

    My favourite stanza

    Well written

    x

  • 8 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Agn..i just love evrythin abt dis poem..
    D feel of new love,
    Bt at d same time
    bad memories of past ruining d strength of accpting him..
    Bt at d same time
    realizing dt u r incomplete widout him..and smwhr during d gud and bad thoughts..
    a hrtbeat goes, pumping d blood of new love into ur veins and let u knw ..he is meant fr u..

  • 8 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Be free of the shackles and dive into chance.
    Through your poems you'll find the freedom to fly.
    Excellent write