SelfControl

by Sunshine   Dec 8, 2011


Go farther than looks
seek beyond hints
search behind words
BUT
be responsible toward the weaknesses
of your feelings..

if you found love, there.

by: Rania Moallem

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  • 12 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    It's a few syllables longer than a tanka - sure it's a poem; not only that, it's a great poem.

    "seek beyond hints"
    This, of course is something guys don't do. ;-)

    Seriously, the wisdom of being sensitive to your own hidden (repressed?) feelings and not only to recognize their existence, but to know you must take personal responsibility for them: that's the essence of growth.

    Love may be hidden or denied. So true, and sometimes you have to accept it can be felt.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Haha :p

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Haha come on..it's just a moral..somehow :P dnt be harsh on me

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    ^ lol hahahha
    :p

    I was gonna tell you ARE YOU OKAY??

    :p

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Definitely, not a poem...but ah well :D listen to me !

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