Portrayed Strength

Really well-written. I love the message of this piece and the title fits perfectly. 5/5

-X

I am not strong
it's just what I put on,
an act I'm so good at.

I can pretend
all I want
but when night falls
the tears fall as well

For thee only person
I can't fool...
is myself..

Wow,kristian..i mean hw cud u..such a hrt touching poem..
Evry single prsn on dis planet can easily relate to dis one..

No one sees
a heart broken girl,
all the hurt that she's felt.

They can't see past
her sweetness
and the kind hearted
person she is,
innocence to great
but she is delicate
and fragile too.
-Wrong there love. I can see through anything :)

I love this poem. Saying you aren't who you come off to be. That you only want people to see you as this strong girl, when as soon as night time comes you slowly fall apart as tears pour out.

This has sad emotion in it
Love it hun
5/5