Departure Time Of My Memories

by Boy   Dec 14, 2011


As Life going with unstoppable time
My heart has learned to beat softly
With the chords of new belongings
Feeling some relief inside the soul

A stream of tears restoring again inside
Building strong shore with desire and wishes
Lastly I feel soundless sea after a dark storm
Giving the rest to tears-way behind my eyes

I am standing with spreading my arms fully
Closing my eyes while looking at the shining sky
Feeling a silent smiles inside my souls and body
Because this is the Departing Time Of My Memories.
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  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Really amazing poem, i like it the way you write..the emotion is powerful and i feel the sadness in each stanza and love the way you write your ending part...

    >I am standing with spreading my arms fully
    Closing my eyes while looking at the shining sky
    Feeling a silent smiles inside my souls and body
    Because this is the Departing Time Of My Memories.
    Truly amazing",
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    Wow this was great. I really enjoyed the imagery here. Expressed your emotions very well. We will start from the beginning:

    As Life going with unstoppable time
    My heart has learned to beat softly
    With the chords of new belongings
    Feeling some relief inside the soul

    This reminded me of a beautiful melody. Soothing to the soul. Very nice.

    A stream of tears restoring again inside
    Building strong shore with desire and wishes
    Lastly I feel soundless sea after a dark storm
    Giving the rest to tears-way behind my eyes

    The way you likened the sea giving to rest as your feelings was very good. I could feel that sense of calmness.

    I am standing with spreading my arms fully
    Closing my eyes while looking at the shining sky
    Feeling a silent smiles inside my souls and body
    Because this is the Departing Time Of My Memories.

    And I could really see this as the person sits in the night sky taking everything in. Such a wonderful feelinng. Excellent job. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by hisxgurl

    So nice....i like it!

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I love this poem though it kinda feels like a mystery to me,,a great job it's wonderful and beautiful some mesmerizing spots and words fantastic :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Amazing job Hassan.
    This is by far one of the best you ever wrote.
    The emotions are just so deep and sincere.

    Keep up the good work :)