My heart; an Autumn

by Sunshine   Jan 12, 2012


My heart, an Autumn
endlessly falling-
a strange season by itself
yet blossoming like no other.

For it falls with the softest breeze
your gentle winter
blows upon me.
Each move you make
chills my skin,
freezes my feet
almost steals a beat
out of me.

Just for me to ripen again
like half a spring, within
the few seconds it takes you
to breathe, deeply 'neath
my senses- then I with seconds
passing ahead of me,
I fall right again before you
...for you.

And though your presence
makes me shine like a
summer's sun, but being
your Autumn became
an addiction-that I
can't let go of

for the sake of its
new meaning,
radiant colors, for its
novel symbols.

Falling forevermore;
flourishing even-more.

by: Rania Moallem

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is an exuberating piece, using nature to compose poems is so enriching thus real. All seasons use to describe the whole experience of love. It's spell-binding, i love the imagery, it's so vivid. I can imagine this in a love song. What a classic love poem. :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is an exuberating piece, using nature to compose poems is so enriching thus real. All seasons use to describe the whole experience of love. It's spell-binding, i love the imagery, it's so vivid. I can imagine this in a love song. What a classic love poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by East Poetry

    I really like this poem and how you liken your essence the the seasons, He as winter and yourself as Autumn. I enjoyed how you attribute falling in your poem to both the nature of Autumn
    and to also how you keep falling for your love. There is a sweet serenity to this poem that is unmistaken. A simple master piece 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    Great opening stanza
    -a strange season by itself
    yet blossoming like no other. - wonderful

    I like the metaphors. And the heartfelt emotions that come thru.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Really good poem..nice flow amazingly written

    Well done 100/100 from mee love(:

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