Shifting Dreams

Wow, this poem is amazing. I love the simplicity of it, and how there are so much meaning behind it. I'm very fascinated by dreams, and I love how you expressed feelings of fear and nostalgia in this poem through a dream that turns into a nightmare.

I love this part:
"you entered my reverie -
with such violent intentions"

Great job!

It takes talent to speak clearly in just a few words to give the full impact of what you are intending to say. You have mastered that in this piece. Loved the wording and the whole emotional theme

Its kinda like u can taste the fear,, great poem and always fantastically worded and excellently written I lo ed it a very wonderful job 5/5

Lovely poem

'Violent intentions' it's the intention of the person that has great impact

Short but well said. Your words had a profound effect on me. Once again another great poem by you.

5/5