Never Again

This is a sad but well written love poem

Stanza 1
Your wording was simple and straight forward to the point you wanted to convey. I see a very sad girl being lied to by someone she loves and believes. So heartfelt.

Stanza 2
Its either your love promised something that you had to wait for or he was away but your love was unconditional and never died despite the circumstances you were in. But all that love and waiting with no avail builds anger in your heart. Great use of words here and i see rhyming which has been well done.

Stanza 3
Now you go on to describe how you felt when you were together. Again, good rhyming here though i felt as if the word sighed dint fit there but thats okay.

Stanza 4
This part was great. You will never fall in love again or have given up completely because of how he treated you. The pain you felt was too much to bear that you just dont want to go through it again, wonderful.

i give this a 5

Pitiful, though it's nice..

Awesome:) loving it...i can relate to this