Tell Me

by Brittany Klein   Jan 30, 2012


6-27-2011

Tell me that I'm crazy
And you might be right
Tell me that I'm blind
But YOU don't see my fright?

Tell me that I'm not worth it
I've heard that before
Tell me that I don't care
While I'm shut behind locked doors.

Go ahead and tell me
That I can do better than that
But you won't say that for long
Because I might die in combat.

Tell me that I am stronger than before
And I won't care to listen
Tell me that I'm being stubborn
And you call yourself a Christen?

Why don't you go ahead and tell me
That I just need to leave
Maybe someday soon
I will no longer breathe.

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  • 11 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Is that how you feel or this is just a write?
    Cause if that is what you feel, I assure you that things will be different from now, and all you will see are smiley faces all happy for what you are...
    A welcoming gesture of life in combat...
    Just have it in you, we all have faith as we do.

  • 11 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    This is a moving piece great job

  • 13 years ago

    by Mag

    You have no chances to die in poems combat

    Take Care!

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