Heart attack

by Whispy.Gypsy   Feb 9, 2012


You lay in ur bed
and stare at the celing
you press ur hands to ur head
trying to get rid of this feeling

what have i done
where am i going
not all that great, no fun
all these scars they come, showing

picture frames getting smashed
nothing left unsaid
my teddy bear sees the glass
seeing my pictures with no head

silently crying praying ud come back
nothing more than a mear heart attack

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  • 13 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    A very good dark poem
    keep it up!

    i enjoyed reading this, even though the subject is sad i think you have written it very well.

    The rhyming was good and the overall flow was good too =).. i can definatley relate

    5/5 from me

  • 13 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Wow very great poem :] i love it

    im sorry for your loss :[
    be strong<3

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Great poem!I loved it!

    Steven

  • 13 years ago

    by Karla

    Nice poem. Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Whispy.Gypsy

    Thank you :)

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