Soiled Treasure

by Yakori bint Muhammed   Feb 13, 2012


9th January, 2012.

Eyelids roll, to unveil dark pupil.
Swollen sore limbs gives me a handful ache.
Blurry sighted, I'm shrouded in white rags;
left home wearing pink outfit
with a peach veil.
Behold me, frenzied,
pale from unseen agony

A frantic aura welcomes me, the stink of rotting rubbish;
Invisible to my teary eyes, I breathe the befoul air.
Splatters of black paint fill the walls and
white curtains hang loose, swaying like leaves;
In the quiet dilapidated alcove.

On the ceiling odd images, ascribed in red.
The room, frost like a riverside gives me slight shivers.
I look around the eerie room, slowly sitting.
I see a daring mean face as I turn my head, clockwise,
It lies inside a broken frame on the tile floor.

The stranger in the picture looks familiar,
the only hint to my dilemma.
In the rear an antique settee caught my eyes.
A torn cotton cushion lay on top, exposing its feathers;
an awkward feeling arises, I feel queasy.

Obliviously,
I am distracted by the ancient pot in front of me;
made of clay with engrave patterns in the middle,
covered with an obsolete green dotted bowl.
I notice an accessory, by the side,
seems it fell off from the strangers hand.

Pieces of shattered glass glimmer on.
I move closer to satisfy my yearning conscience.
Appalled with the discovery I almost screamed.
At the close gaze I see a watch,
strained I fight pains to stand up.

My right leg limps, walking to the door seems like a journey.
Surprisingly it is unlocked, liquid stains on the door knob.
Gently I opened it, came to a halt with a deafening sound.
My leg weighing my flight to escape, going down the porch.
Yet hastening up I walk like a marathon racer, without looking back.

Just a bit further on the other lane of the suburb, I see a narrow road.
I let out a delightful smile, emotions radiating through me.
Slowly i get there, the ache of my leg turning into joy.
Leaning on a tree to rest my limbs,
a taxi came by out of the remote.
I boarded it, at last freed from the alcove.

Figments cloud my memory but what really transpired?
Last evening sitting on the log in the garden up the hill.
My brothers friend came by to have a glimpse of what is cooking.
As he was chatting us up, the glimmer from his watch got my attention.
Pondering, I became voiceless, a victim to a sneer hypocrite I was.

The taxi zoomed off to my vicinity,
Fierce anger giving birth to a tearful me.
Lost I resort to meditate.

(c) Y-MAG

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks for the comment, such overwhelming words. It's not a personal experience, but a tribute to those that have gone through such inhumane act. To accept, forgive and have hope to move on. Haven't thought of a sequel, but will think of that incase ideas come through. Thank you, blessings. :) ..

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I believe that the best stories told are through poems, because they give you that extra song and thrill you need to be able to live it. I love the tittle, it's what caught my eye, and you used it in a very different way than I imagined, which intrigued me to read furthermore. I also think I understand what you mean by the tittle, that sometimes truth is a "treasure", but when it's something you'd rather not know it is "soiled".

    I like how you progress in your story, it makes the mind work thinking of what will happen next, and it's very real how you described things... I hope this was just your imagination though and not a real experience, because it is disturbing to find yourself in such a position.

    You should write a part 2, I'm still curious about it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Berry sister, you came by, my gratitude is full to the brim. Thanks for the comments. God bless you, much love dear, Jazakallah. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by christopher

    Yakori thank for your comment and opinion. i don't know how long it took you to write soiled treasure or how much editing you done. at first glance and read i thought your poem was too long. the word used were descriptive and honest which came from your heart. i will dare to offer you a fools advice i edit and adit my poems and after about 4to 5 weeks i of writing the poem i put it away for a while and then i come back to the poem and see is there anything else i neet to correct or change. the less words the better your poetry but the words have to be wright for your poem keep writing your talent will blossom in time.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks for the comment, blessings to you. :)

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