The Craving

by Lioness   Mar 6, 2012


I couldn't help
but notice how
much I'd crave
for your endless
affection.

The way our
eyes would meet -
feels like I've been
taken over by a calm
entity.

The feeling washes
above me like a sun
shower which
always manages
to keep me warm.

I would long for those
intimate kisses where
the passion exceeds any
expectations.

A simple touch
from you would
keep me in an hypnotic
state -

and take me
out of this
downward spiral
where I would
have ended up,

without you.

    report violation
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  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Nomination :0)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Good work

    The feeling washes
    above me like a sun
    shower which
    always manages
    to keep me warm

    This one is very nice

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh Liz-

    Mercy... such a beautiful love poem....

    "The feeling washes
    above me like a sun
    shower which
    always manages
    to keep me warm."

    ^^^ what an elegant, soft, and touching stanza....

    a touch of sadness.... however elegantly written.... beautiful piece~

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Liz,
    Another smashing poem by you. So beautiful and completely faultless.

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Good poem, I must admit I like how you brought this piece together. Sensual, tender, and sweet all in one.

    Great poem

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