Knife in my hand

by Kelwin lost in thought   Mar 29, 2012


Here I am again
with a knife in my hand
here comes the kiss of the blade
it shows that my heart cries
it shows that I'm alive
the kiss of the blade
is such a wounderfull thing
it makes me happy
it takes my pain away
so thanks blade
I love you

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  • 12 years ago

    by Just A Stupid Girl

    Awe Hun that's very good very emotinal. Love it. Good job love :)

  • 12 years ago

    by anonymous

    Interesting.. makes you think... just wow.. good write. it expresses alot of emotion in just a few lines.. it is very detailed..
    5/5
    good write

  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    I love how you showed what a person actually feels when they cut... and why they cut. It's to get away from the pain and eventually... its like an addiction, you love the feel of the blade across your skin.

    Gorgeously written 5/5 <3

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