Choice

I know, I commented on this one before. But I tetras it and so far this one is my favorite from you.

Hmm
lets see starting with the title
its perfect for this poem

the flow was great and the rhymes was perfect

i love how u ended this poem
so good
overall very well penned poem
5/5 =)

Wow again top notch. you have some real talents there. this one was really inspired. great work

I hate that feeling of having to make a choice and for a few moments or a day you want to just escape the pondering questions in your head but there is literally no where to run or hide!....nice poem, I can relate especially right now with some decisions I have to make!

Good job!

The rhymes were well penned, but there are some issues with the punctuation. This line for example:

"Gradually sinking, into my head
Guilt is such. A powerful fear"
I suggest you remove the period. It'll flow much better..

"Time is racing, making me choose
Which one to keep, which one to lose"
I like this part. It's so relatable. Usually choices make you lose something you don't want to lose if you choose the wrong one.

"Decisions wailing, I cannot decide
Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide"
I really like these endings.. The reader is left to think what would happen next..

Overall, a really nice write. Keep writing :) 5/5

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