Circle of Emotions

That is some piece of writing I can't tell you how much that moved me, such a beautiful piece. Big sigh!! I genuinely think there's nothing worse than heartache it is so encompassing it takes all of our senses away and can leave us numb, I don't think I've ever written so much in a comment before.....for me....it was just exquisite 5/5 all day long xx

I loved the whole concept of the poem with the whole finding each others breaking point.

I found this poem to be deep and it really pulled at my heart strings. Many people experiance relationships where we thought the one person who wouldn't hurt them actually does and it turns out they don't just hurt us a little they hurt us deeply, so deeply infact it bring us to our breaking point.

You picked an excellent topic to write about and you did the subject justice. I just hope this poem is a work of fiction and not something you have had to experiance.

5/5

Your style of writing is different than others.
This poem is simple but really powerful:)
Great poem Liz:)

Great n beautiful piece

Liz,
Again it is the simplicity in your words that brings out the best in you, contrasting with those emotions...
I sensed anger in your words and strength too.

This piece really was awesome.

love
xx