Hope I'm not too late

by Something Diabolical   Apr 20, 2012


Spellbound by your smile, laughter and eyes
like a rose you are always looking beautifull
You've become too close to my heart
The thought of your smile makes me die and be reborn,I miss you always...

My heart lives for your heart
You make the clouds disappear
My heart stops beating only for you
Like an endless song it echo's in my ears

The love we have, sets my heart on fire.
The strength of desire
So many experiences yet to unfold
I watch and wait in the mist

This poem was made for a contest where you had to copy and paste 1 line from previous poems you had written, only 1 line per poem. This is what i came up with.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Kota the Unheard

    WOW if i did that it would be MESSED UP since i write suiside, depression,an love fantastic. U ar great

  • 13 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Spellbound by your smile, laughter and eyes
    like a rose you are always looking beautifull
    You've become too close to my heart
    The thought of your smile makes me die and be reborn,I miss you always...

    This was my fav stanza. Just the first lines alone made it for me. You have penned it well. One would think that you actually wrote this but to think you just copied and pasted your previous poems, very interesting and i must say, its very creative.

  • 13 years ago

    by Max

    Wow
    the is lovely and great
    i love the emotion in this one and the word choice is good too
    5/5 amazing keep on =)

  • 13 years ago

    by Mello193

    I agree. pretty awesome.

  • 13 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You did great

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