All we do is scream.

by Jenn   Apr 22, 2012


It never really changes,
Same old routine.
Like a broken record ,
All we do is scream.

When it's good, it's great.
We're better than the rest.
When it's bad, it's cruel
Staying on this wheel like fools.

You say you still love me, it's lie.
I say I don't want to leave, it's a lie.
You know I hate you, you love it.
I know you hate me, I don't care.
The way we treat each other, simply is not fair.

Is it sick to say I love it,
when you're mean to me?
Is it wrong to want to be
Miserable... with you.

I've tried to leave before
You promised it would be different.
But...
I'm starting to see it will never be different
And I will never leave...

It never really changes,
Same old routine.
Like a broken record ,
All we do is scream.

*This is a poem about my more than most of the time sick relationship. About how no matter how ugly it get's, I can't seem to leave. This one's for all the devoted men and woman, who know they should leave but are just to love blind to do so.*

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  • 13 years ago

    by Max

    This is very nice
    "It never really changes,
    Same old routine.
    Like a broken record ,
    All we do is scream."
    I love those lines, and i love the way u pictured that kind of relations in poetry ,So sad,Full of emotions gr8 choice of words and easy flow u get the 5/5 for sure keep on good work =)

  • 13 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "Is it sick to say I love it,
    when your mean to me."
    your--you're
    And add a question mark to that emotion-filled stanza.

    "Like a broken record ,
    All we do is scream."

    I agree with Dagmar, this piece--it's message, the words--they've been used before in different lights and angles. But what I so love about this piece is the way my heart beat faster when I read the concluding lines. The repetition of that line just made this poem so sinister and melancholic. Great write 5/5 :)

    -X

  • 13 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Like a broken record, them words sound so familiar

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