Igloo

I just melted reading this..... You have touched me with this awesome and breathtaking poem..... You my dear can write!!!!!!!

Your talent makes my mouth drop!

Your title is so creative, and then as I read each line it ties in so well, I could honestly say I watched the igloo melting away as you sit there with pen in hand and exposed... made me cry to be honest... when you allow yourself to melt and feel the pain its a scary thing...but also a courageous thing to do.... very touching poem Yaki... well done!!

Yaki, that's so so so different!

So original and simply described. I loved how you at first started it by saying that loneliness and sadness makes us feel, and that means makes us feel warm, I love how you mentioned that coldness = having no emotions. I just loved what you wrote. I like the soldiers training image, you hear them as if they are some army queue hitting the ground with their strong feet, I can imagine that.

'my body is far too smart
for me, I can't fool it
for too long, it hates
routines.'

I so feel this part, Yaki! I really do. Yes, we cannot be strong forevermore, we can't just feel the same things all the time and convince ourselves that we are 'fine' and then we try to move on as if... Ahhhh I just so relate to this, that is if I got you right in the first place, lol. I love how simple that went, without any complications, yet with that tint of mystery Yaki always excels in. ;)

I enjoyed the read!

Man,your too amazing to be understood. Will come up with a comment soon.mwa

I like the term "Igloo"
a cold place making your body numb
not able to feel anything
the minute the body warm up here goes
the pain
5/5