Love...

by Elise   Apr 29, 2012


His eyes shone like the brightest stars,
But each time he looked at me I got the big scars.

I wonder if I could love someone ever again,
As his love already had caused me a lot of pain.

My best friend is just like you.
He talks and looks just like you.
So tell me please what do I do.
I look at you, and my thoughts regard you too.

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  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I really liked this one as well, I actually thought it flowed quite nicely and liked how you described your feelings for that person here.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    Nice poem, very clever... Good rhymes

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    Nice poem, very clever... Good rhymes

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    Nice poem, very clever... Good rhymes

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    Nice poem, very clever... Good rhymes

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