Daddy

by Elise   Apr 28, 2012


'Daddy I love you' this was my first phrase.
I really did like him and always looked at him with daze.

I could have praised my dad as if he was supreme
For he was just as bright as the heavens' beam.

As a kid I used to ask 'would you be with me forever'
'Yes' He used to say that there will be no need to sever.
Until he betrayed us and left my heart forever.
Breaking it so harshly that I wouldn't want to see him ever.

He ruined our heaven and my world that was filled with rife.
He said that the problem was that I couldn't play the fife.
And now I really wish that he wouldn't appear in my broken life.

But now he is with me. He took me away,
It looks for me as if i'm standing on brae.
As only me and mummy could understand that we are fey.

And I guess the way to protest I had no wright to say.
And I swear to God I will run away I am prepared to pay.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Elise

    Thank you very much:) your views are very impotant to me :) Feel free to correct me anytime ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Alanis

    Love it!!!!<3

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    I thought this was a great poem. You really expressed a lot of emotion here of pain and sorrow. All in all a great write. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    Very nice poem... Very emotional... And I can understand what u meant about the stanzas... How are mine going By The Way?

    • 12 years ago

      by Elise

      Yours are very good Amy and thank you very much for your coments they have inspired me to write my new poem. (I have alredy posted it)

  • 12 years ago

    by symonelouise27

    This is very well written and you have conveyed the strong emotions well. I can relate to this, to an extent. I really like this one though :D