You, me, are not to be. [Acrostic]

by Jenn   Apr 30, 2012


Your stone, standing strong in your stubbornness
Overruling, what you say is law. Knowing no on will fight it.
Undoing my confidence, taking me to the brink of insanity...

Mangled, tangled, tortured with the love I have for you.
Enfolded so deeply, I could never leave. Even if I want to...

Arranged perfectly, you set us up as if dolls.
Re-writing our scrips, to make the world see us as normal...
Even on our best days, we're worse than any other.

Nothing between us matches up, nothing is solid ground.
Oven on high heat, our fight's incinerate our love.
Trying to hold strong too, I will never show my pain...

Take 3 hated step's back, to every 1 loving step forward.
Over and over, in waves, I'm drowning can't you see?

Belonging some where else, but I will never leave...
Even though I know... You, Me, are not to be.

Eh. not great. But my first attempt at an acrostic poem.
This is another one about those relationship's, that you know are wrong. But you know you will probably never leave.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "Re-writing our scrips, to make the world see
    us as normal..."
    scrips--scripts
    "Oven on high heat, our fight's incinerate our
    love."
    ---I'd rather this was "Oven on high heat, our fight incinerates our love"
    "Take 3 hated step's back, to every 1 loving
    step forward."
    ---step's=steps. I've personally always didn't like poems with digits, but this one works, I like it
    "Over andover, in waves, I'm drowning can't
    you see?
    Belonging some where else, but I will never
    leave...
    Eventhough I know... You, Me, are not to
    be."
    ---the ending lines are superb, Jenn!!
    "Not great"... Not great????? This is amazing. I love it :) Keep writing
    -X

  • 13 years ago

    by Max

    Hmm
    "Arranged perfectly, you set us up as if doll's.
    Re-writing our scrip's, to make the world see us as normal.
    Even on our best day's, we're worse then any other."
    Doll's---dolls
    scrip's---scrips
    day's---days
    then---than
    other than these its cool i love the emotion and the flow
    good job still 5/5 =)

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