IN-LOVE

by M I L L Y   May 7, 2012


I CAN FINALLY SAY IM ACTUALLY IN-LOVE
I'VE NEVER FELT LIKE THIS BEFORE
YES I'VE LOVED
BUT NOT LIKE THIS
THIS IS UNEXPLAINABLE

IT'S HARD TO BELIEVE
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH
MY HEART SKIPS A BEAT
WHEN YOU'RE AROUND
IS SUCH A RUSH.

I GAVE YOU MY HEART,
I BEGAN TO TRUST,
BEFORE I KNEW IT
IT WAS MORE THAN LUST.

I'VE NEVER MISS NOBODY
LIKE I MISS YOU
I'VE NEVER FELT SO MUCH PAIN
THIS IS INSANE

CAN'T WAIT FOR MY BABY TO COME BACK
I THINK THAT DAY IMA GET A HEART ATTACK.

MY TEARS BEEN IN A ROLLER COASTER
SINCE YOU'VE BEEN AWAY
CANT WAIT FOR DECEMBER TO COME
SO I CAN KEEP THEM STRAIGHT

MY LOVE FOR YOU GIVES ME PATIENCE
IT GIVES ME THE STRENGTH I NEEDED
ITS THE BEST FEELING EVER

I LOVE YOU AND I WISH YOU A VERY
HAPPY BIRTHDAY EVEN THOUGH
YOU'RE AWAY.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I'm in agreement with Xanthe. The all caps just really threw me off on this poem. :S
    It's a sweet poem you wrote nonetheless.

  • 8 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    Um, is your caps broken?,, lol Good poem its really sweet, needs more metaphors..
    4/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    I dont like the caps either, but over all the poem is good I loved your lines, they're deep and you can tell your emotions go very deep from reading this poem

    I'VE NEVER MISS NOBODY
    LIKE I MISS YOU
    I'VE NEVER FELT SO MUCH PAIN
    THIS IS INSANE

    thats what happens huh, you go insane. . . I know I've been there before, sometimes still am there but stay strong and keep writing ;)

  • 8 years ago

    by Max

    This is beautiful piece
    only the capitalization, was a bit bothering while
    reading but it is still good
    keep writing =)

  • 8 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I felt this poem was beautifully written though i agree with Xantha in that the capitalization must go. This was well written with emotions, much has already been said so i will stop here..
    continue writing.