Ouch. your emotions come through crystal clear. I think I"m a little afraid of you as well. good job

Thanks as this is one of my first poems I have written.

Thanks as this is one of my first poems I have written.

Its like a darkness that is looming behind the person...waiting patiently for the kill. An interesting write that leaves the reader with fear or of what is coming next!

I'm sorry for saying sorry
And im sorry you don't care
One day soon you will see that
I am not the one who is sorry and it
Will be me that you fear.

I really like this part. And I am sure that other girls who have experience heartbreak can relate to this as well. Nice poem!

So much meaning and expression, I almost cried, I love your work, another great job, you'll be famous one day, for your amazing poetry, amazing, wonderful, outstanding...

Nice piece. I can feel the strong emotion here and the darkness of the feeling of persona. I hope you feel better this time. Great job:))
~C

Really a nice piece... i love it...

Loved the ending. Great work!

I'm sorry those though words but u did it nice

Wow, love it, you portrayed the feelings very well.. good job

It's nice to write your feeling in this way

The emotion in this poem was very raw, and was portrayed to the reader fully. This part in particular touched home for me:

"I am not the one who is sorry and it
Will be me that you fear. "

Absence felt, reminds relevance. Within every scar, healing dwells.

Absence felt, reminds relevance. Within every scar, healing dwells.

love it