Oh! God.

by marlon lumangyao   Jun 2, 2012


God give me strength to go
and to let go,
of my friends and family,
and to this precious girl next to me.

God laid them rest in thier bed
with your shoulder in thier head,
and please ease thier pain
as the morge fix my body to coffin.

God grant me this wish,
please share me your thoughts,
because i can't find a way;
the best!
to let go of the people that i love the most.

goodbyes wont last forever,
they say,
but this departure seems like the contrary,

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  • 13 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    God laid them rest in thier bed
    with your shoulder in thier head,
    and please ease thier pain
    as the morge fix my body to coffin.

    I enjoyed this verse of the poem and felt that I could relate to it strongly. I felt this was the part in which the whole poem was structured almost the centre point if you will.

    I was enjoying the poem and enjoyed the meaning behind it; I too sometimes struggle with this.

    Very well done and nicely written.

    • 13 years ago

      by marlon lumangyao

      Thank you mr. dark savior for taking your time reading my poem...

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