Lonely Feelings

by Boy   Jun 6, 2012


Another day without you would spend
This time moments are not like years
Smoothly giving me feelings for old memories
Would passed like nonstop train in front of me
There is no existence of those footprints anymore
On the sand of my love places vanishing everything
Dancing noises inside my ears makes me feel worst
That gives me the immortality in this strange state
For the time of eternity.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Well written, describing this lonely feeling

  • 7 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    First off Im happy to read something new by you:)

    Would passed like nonstop train in front of me
    There is no existence of those footprints anymore
    On the sand of my love places vanishing everything
    ^^
    this is my fav part:)

    This is really sad, we can sense the sadness through out the poem, good job:)