Little Timmy

by Thomas   Jun 14, 2012


He smokes some weed
Takes the shoes of his feet
Tilt his head back
And puts on a track

While he is fuzzing
His conscience is buzzing
Not sure if it's remorse
Or his thoughts being coarse

Then the emptiness of the room
Hits his heart with a feeling gloom
Surprised by this feeling
He reaches for the ceiling

Calling out the creature
That in his life he didn't feature
His existence denied
In every way he ever tried

Suddenly his heart stops beating
His soul being eaten
Down a dark hole he takes flight
Not aware of the light

As the light is fading
He is still procrastinating
But only one thing he can say:
Little Timmy came out to play

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  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Bad habits kills for sure, but your poem is excellent

  • 11 years ago

    by Timothy

    Enjoyed this very much; nice name choice!
    No, but in all honesty, the structure works really well and this seems to complement the given diction. Good game!

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This was an awese piece. You done an amazing job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Awesome piece, a very nice rhyme! great job! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Aaliyah Marshall

    Love it:)