Dear Brother

I like to write poem or letter as well because sometimes talking just lead to an argument.
''It's not about
reaching the highest top
But about climbing out
of the holes on the road''
I really like this part.
Very well written :)

Its so hard to reach family sometimes and to get them to see what we see,,,,

Very sweet piece, not harsh, yet still desperately calling for your brothers attention. :) loved

Hopefully your brother listens.

A splendid piece, that brings us back down to earth. Makes us think of where we all started, because that's just as important as the climb. To remember those who helped us get to where we are today and to remember that there is more than what our ambition desires. That our ambition can be both a blessing and a curse. But in the end, we are only human, and we mustn't forget who we were before we began the climb.

5/5

You know this is in fact sad and painful to read, beacuse two brothers cannot talk honestly and openly directly and have to write to express their feelings in letters.

The poem sets out to point out that some people are so caught up in themselves that really they cannot see or hear others which is really so sad.

Such a touching and emotional write, well penned.

I love writing and reading poems about life, this piece touched me, I really like it:)
Great job Thomas:)