by Maple Tree Jun 18, 2012
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
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Deadly mascara dances under the moon, as night time cries, |
by Amanda Brown
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Wow.... The flow of this is beautiful... You are very good |
by L
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Mascara, dark poems... In two poems that I have read, this sounds like a contest. Pretty awesome, I like reading this one. Everything was so smooth and the finally stroke me.. Another nightmare to choke on. I'm starting to like the use of mascara in more poems. This was really really good. |
by Naughtymouse
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Aahhhh syrup!! |
by Lioness
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It looks like this may be the poem we were asked to write for the contest. I have to say that this is awesome!!! The images are dark and just so vivid and the words you've used are brilliant. |
by Unknown
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I am speechless as well, this is fantastic! I am definitely adding this to my favs! :) |