Comments : Between death and life

  • 7 years ago

    by Karla

    Intriguing and creative

  • 7 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely Done!!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Khalid

    Thank You Robert! All the best

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Life: You don't give them any chance
    Death: That's your responsibility when they were still alive
    Life: They will love me at the end
    Death: I'm your end, and the more they live the more they get closer to me
    Life: Who'll be left since you're also perishable?
    Death: Their good work! Whatever good they do in the first live will find in the next life

    ^^This part stood out for me and liked how you have given life and death a voice to debate and talk about each other leaving the reader with a very good advice at the end..excellent :)