by Paula Jun 30, 2012
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
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The door is inching open |
by Terry Hume
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I hate the subject matter as its very upsetting. The poem is disturbing and I think its supposed to be disturbing. Its a delicate balance of repulsiveness and reality. Straight forward and I feel your desperation in it. Keep writing. Good job. |
by Karla
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Daddies and uncles can cause immense problems. |
by karyssa smith
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Very well written. I love how you didn't need to explain why "Daddy" got taken away, and how she still loved him no matter what he did. |