Factory Malfunctions

by Thomas   Jul 10, 2012


First stage
The plan seemed good
The materials
of decent quality

Second stage
The assembly
Went pretty smooth
against the odds

Third stage
Primary programming
Went real well
No twisted wires

Fourth stage
Secondary programming
Wasn't so smooth
Social file malfunction

Fifth stage
Final programming
Total disaster
Software attacked hardware

So here stands
Before you
The flawed product
Of life's factory

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  • 13 years ago

    by Unknown

    I really like how you described the different stages. A unique piece!

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    I think I went straight to the fifth stage lol

    Yes quite unique - I like what you've done here. I thought at first it was talking about products rather than people.

    Awesome

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    I think this is quite original, relating the quality of technology in an analogy process of production to life.

    I wasn't sure where you were going, but the ending was an awesome execution! LOVED IT

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