Forever Love too

by Ray Blue   Jul 12, 2012


On this special day,
Time have arrive
These words I'm longing to say and now

When love is forever,
As time flies with these tides
We're still holding on together

Go on follow your dreams,
Just remember, my love will wait
For eternity, I'll be here
Just like your promise
As days goes by,
Your eyes are like soft starlights

Forever love, forever you
Endlessly, waiting through
No other reason, forever love

Don't forget the times we shared
Precious moments, my heart
Will always sing our destiny

Forever love, because all my life
I'll wait until the end of time,
My love for you will never change

Forever love, forever you
Words, time and you
Once gone, still waiting through
Until I see someday your here
Forever love

You have wings,
To follow your dreams.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    I can't say more i read ur poems all are really full of love.

    • 11 years ago

      by Ray Blue

      Thank you Jyoti for the nice comment. Have a great day my friend!

  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    So gentle, peaceful.
    "Your eyes are like soft starlights" - Beautifully expressive poem. 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is a sweet tone to this piece and while reading this poem it gives a feeling and image of olden times. I also like the repetition of this line:

    "Forever love, forever you"

    It reinforces your true feelings and it does not sound like you are simply saying it but truly are feeling it.

    "You have wings,
    To follow your dreams.

    I also like how you ended this love poem with a positive and encouraging note rather then the usual line which every love poem has! So all in all a lovely tender write :)

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