My Healer

by Thomas   Jul 14, 2012


The longing for you
Was my favorite topic
It was an illness
Without feeling sick

Instead it healed me
Healed the hole in my chest
Helped me pass
Life and school's tests

Now that we've met
There is so much more I want to say
I just want to hold you
And make sure that you'll stay

Everything I felt before
Seemed stale since I saw that spark
The spark that lights up your eyes
The one that left a mark

I hope this mark is permanently
Like how I think of you
I hope this love stays strong
Cause it's what I pursued

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  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    What a beautiful write Thomas
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Stellar! Just I have some points:
    (i) In the 2nd stanza I think 'Helped me pas' should read 'Helped me pass'
    (ii) 4th stanza I think the tense of 'seems' should be in the past as 'seemed' because you're describing things in the past.
    This aside, I realy enjoyed the nice flow.

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